20 May 2012

First chapter sample, First Draft, UNISON: ARC

ONCE AGAIN THIS IS A FIRST DRAFT OF THE OPENING TO UNISON: ARC, ITS NOT GREAT BUT ITS A CONCEPT AND NEEDS EDITTING AND SUCH. MUCH LOVE


The densely forested area whistled as four shadowy figures ran at extreme speed between its trees. Leaves ripped from low bearing branches as air sheared around the figures’ bodies, cutting what they passed. Dusk-light pierced through the balconies of treetop, casting beams down to what was mostly shadowed ground. Like spectres the figures disappeared into the darkness, only to flash through the light beams as the continued their sprint. Little amounts of light left them running blind, only the sounds of crunching foliage and rushing air punctuated their movement, keeping them together.

                Their movement was relentless, unyielding and constant.  In the distance ahead of where the four were running a colossal weight slammed to the earth, rattling the ground. The figures disappeared into shadow and silence. After a short silence a flame began to burn from the origin of the crash, revealing a felled tree across the ground. Fire spread across the bark and began to smoke.



No sign of the figures remained. However, from the scolding flames slowly engulfing the surroundings, another figure came into focus, seemingly untouched by the blaze around it. Despite the light of the fire, this figure remained black with its arms folded, unmoving against the animate flames. Suddenly the folded arms were thrown out, away from the body and in tandem the flame erupted outwards, spreading over a wider area but thinning around the figure. But the figure transformed, what once seemed to be a normal human was now an anthropomorphic wolf creature. Even stranger though was the wolf-man’s body, it was almost transparent and glowing gold with burning white eyes. The wolf flexed its muscles, as it moved each limb a spiked collar formed around its neck, wrists and ankles.  A bestial roar erupted from it and the glow of its body intensified, illuminating a large area around where it stood.

                The four hidden figures had remained still and silent but they began to talk amongst themselves.

                “Target acquired, ARC squad maintain positions. This is ARC-1 maintaining visual. Target is preparing volatile projectiles.” The First of the four said. As she finished, the great wolf reached back, as if to grab the fire, as he did so a large ball of flame isolated itself from the blaze.  As the beast swung its arm forward the fireball followed the motion.  The projectile rocketed and hit into one of the seemingly infinite number of trees. Excess flames sprayed from the impact and singed the ground’s plant life.

                “This is ARC-2, preparing to engage a deflection procedure, leave the flame projectiles to me.”

                “Good plan ARC-2, I’m recommending we flank and sting the target, I will spear head with physical combat while 3 and 4 focus on co-ordinating ranged strikes.” Two more voices spoke, saying “agreed”.

                ARC-2’s voice appeared again, “Okay I will alternate between support and debilitation tactics”

                “Perfect, let’s power up and go.” In a similar way to the wolf ARC-1 appeared, crouched behind a tree. She became visible when a faint blue, slightly transparent form transformed her skin. The glow was weak because her body was clad in strong, metal-lined, leather clothes, revealing only her face. Even her head looked ghostly as the night-vision goggles stopped her eyes from being visible in the dark, showing what appeared to be only an eye-less head floating in the shadow. Some parts of the clothing were slightly brighter as the porous gaps in their design released the light from her skin. She rolled out from behind her cover and produced a Shamshir blade made of the same substance that her skin now radiated and that formed the body of the wolf target, different tones of light defined the weapon in its silvery blue colour. The blade was not drawn from a sheath nor was it picked from the ground, this weapon materialised from handle to tip from her hand. The white eyes of the beast tracked onto her position, it took only a moment for her glow to be noticed. She picked herself up from the ground, blade hand in front of her waist, blade pointed up and across to her opposite shoulder. She ran towards the wolf at impressive speed, a testament to her fitness. The target did not move from its position, instead it began to scoop and launch more fireballs, this time aimed at ARC-1.  The first missile came at her, almost half her body size; she immediately ignored it and looked off to her right. ARC-2 was just visible in the shadow running slightly ahead of her. Suddenly her ally’s skin started to glow yellow and he sharply shifted his direction 90 degrees anti-clockwise. ARC-2 then ran directly towards ARC-1’s path and leapt over where they would have crossed. He did so in such a way that he could nearly collide with the fireball, but instead of impacting it he swept an arm across himself in mid-air. This motion caused a flash of yellow light to form a short lasting barrier in front of his body, of which absorbed the hit of the fireball. ARC-1 ran underneath, completely protected from the attack.  A second arm sweep eradicated the flame completely and he dropped back to the ground. Once planted, he stopped glowing and ran back through the shadows. The wolf launched three more fireballs, the first two were removed in the same process by ARC-2 but he was too strained by the energy-use to dispatch the third. Instead ARC-1 threw her sword directly into the ball which caused a small explosion.

                She jumped through the flames as they died down and used the energy- manipulated blaze as a catalyst to make reproducing her sword easier.  She was now close enough to engage the wolf in combat. She jumped and flipped once through the air. Her effortless leap gained her a height of three metres. The soldier began to drop down upon her target. Her bestial enemy, however, was around 50% larger than her in all ways so it pulled its arms up as if to catch her with its savage claws. As the beast prepared to clamp her in its hands a whip-like beam of light restrained its arms from either side, with both bounds being a bright green hue. This surprised the beast and let ARC-1 swoop a downwards blade sweep straight down its chest, completely undefended. ARC-3 and 4 had remained hidden and deployed their powers in perfect timing. ARC-1 put her blade to the neck of the beast and pulled herself up to its face. “Not so tough like this, are you Amon” she laughed at him. He tried to bite at her head, causing her to lean back. Amon roared and contracted every muscle he could, causing the bounds on his arms to rip and fade away. He lashed at her rapidly with both arms; ARC-1 timed a swift backflip manoeuvre to evade this attack. She held her ground as he lashed further, using her blade to block the hits. Occasionally ARC-2’s yellow barriers appeared to protect his ally and some temporarily blocked Amon so she could get in close for a few strikes. This process repeated. Amon was easily distracted by 3 and 4 shooting green projectiles at him from all angles.

                ARC-2 dropped from a branch above Amon and landed on the wolf’s shoulders. He used as much power as he could muster to hold Amon completely still. “Now! Like we planned!” he shouted to the team.

                ARC-1 turned her Shamshir around in her grip so it was pointed behind her. She vaulted at Amon and jumped onto his chest, kicked off, and knocked him stumbling backwards. Number 4 in the group seemed to teleport behind Amon and landed a few punches into the base of his spine, the continuous strikes kept him from falling back. He regained balance but bent forwards, reeling from the hits. ARC-2 returned, once again from above, with a yellow energy knife.  He dropped on Amon’s back and lashed at him frantically while he screamed and twisted, trying to break free. In the process the last of the group, ARC-3 quickly zapped from location to location with energy-made pistols and shot rapid fire pellets of energy at the beast. ARC-4 stood beside 1 with his fists glowing blue with power, they both waited for an opening. It came as Amon lifted both arms over his shoulders to try and grab 2 from his back. They both ran in at extreme speed and began to violently unleash hit after hit.

                In a sudden shift, Amon stopped reacting to the hits he was taking and smiled. He then laughed at his attackers. His body exploded, blowing the four away and into the air. A few seconds after the initial explosion all four were stopped in the air and held in place by an unknown force.  They could all then see a pulsing golden light where Amon once stood.

                “Damn! Break free!” cried ARC-1

                “I’m trying but I’m drained of strength” replied ARC-4

They were not in pain but they were unable to do anything but speak.  They all felt a great level of power building around them, the trees swept in a clockwise direction, as if a powerful tornado was building. They could not feel anything on their bodies, but the trees began to rip from the earth. Soon enough the entire forested area was a mass of loose nature swirling around them, the golden light being the centre point. The ARC team were hopeless to do anything

                As the motion of the forest accelerated the golden eye of the storm contracted and took form.  The figure was human and had the same golden and transparent features as Amon had had. He was dressed in a smart shirt, unbuttoned at the top, with a waistcoat. His trousers were very smart and the whole look was topped off with an armoured gauntlet on one hand and a glistening metal shoulder-guard. The colour of his clothes was unclear as every part of him was gold and glowing. The man clapped to his detained guests then clicked his fingers close to his face. Upon the click the forest vanished and became an enormous open hall, all white, all blank and empty.  He released the ARC’s and walked through them as they stared. The looks on their faces depicted disappointment. The man was quietly chuckling as he left the room. ARC-1 removed her goggles and ruffled her wavy short hair. “You’ve got to be kidding me…”

                ARC-2 copied this motion and leant against her. “Don’t let it get to you Skye. We are never going to be able to beat him. But we’re getting better”. He sounded proud and determined. He lightly punched her arm.
                “Whatever”. She, in return, elbowed him in the chest and walked away, towards the same door the other man had just left through. “We need to be stronger Hertz, this isn’t a game.”

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